I loved you madly from the first,
You give me a hunger and a thirst,
I can’t get my mind off your behind,
Oh, let’s go to a hotel!
I love the way that your hair falls just so,
I love your energy, your get up and go,
I hear you speak and my legs go weak,
Oh, let’s go to a hotel!
I intuit your presence when you walk in,
You’re my guilty pleasure, my luscious sin,
I love your eyes, it’s no surprise,
Oh, let’s go to a hotel!
You’re my touchstone, you’re my muse,
I want to walk marathons in your shoes,
I hear your voice and I rejoice,
Oh, let’s go to a hotel.
I cannot convey how you make me feel,
It’s magical, flammable, quite surreal,
I only know I’ll follow where you go,
Oh, let’s go to a hotel!
I love your touch, I love your scent,
Time with you is time well spent,
Your wizardry bewitches me,
Oh, let’s go to a hotel!
I love the way you laugh, you smile,
You know just how to attract, beguile,
You give me more than I could ever ask for,
Oh, let’s go to a hotel!
You know that you’re my first, my last,
You’re my future, forget the past,
Everything true, is bound up in you,
Oh, let’s go to a hotel!
Hope you DID get to go to a hotel or at least get some special, quiet time. If NOT then, hell… GO TO A HOTEL…
LOL
This was awesome. Ironically, I actually read the title as “Let’s Go to a Love Hotel” before reading this poem, and it still works, haha. If you don’t know what that is…. you can Google it, haha. A special, strange, NSFW amusement from Japan. 😛
Great poem. The lines all worked really well to make me laugh after each verse. 🙂
Alex Hurst, fantasy author in Japan, participating in Blogging A-Z April Challenge.
Thank you Alex! I will Google accordingly! I need to get educated!
Caro, are you sure that you are not French? We French are very forward, and it looks like you are too!
I don’t mince my words!
How cute! Although I must admit the cynical side of me kept waiting for the punchline.
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Thank you Lexa
I enjoyed reading this one, especially for the sheer joy (and lust). Lovely humor . . . reminds me of all the hotels we’ve slept in.
Thank you Beth!!
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!