He was six when he had the urge to make,
A sculpture from metal as a small keepsake,
As a gift for his beloved mother,
A beautiful necklace like no other.
As he matured, his fascination grew,
And he knew full well what he wanted to do,
He longed to work with metal for the rest of his days,
In the most unusual and bespoke of ways,
As Lorimer to a wealthy squire,
Making pieces of harness as he required,
He forged beautiful stirrups and handmade bits,
With every ounce of his skill and wits,
His fame travelled far and quite rightly so,
For he could kit out a horseman from head to toe.
The Lorimer
04 Thursday Apr 2013
Posted in poetry
Lovely piece as always. I’m amazed that you found the time. Just lovely rhyme!!
Yhank
Thanks Carol
How elegant. What a privileged horse!
Th
Thanks Alessa
Leave it to a Brit,
To find an arcane term,
To leave her poem firm,
And, to share her wit.
HAHA! Thanks Roy!
This piece really conjured up some significant imagery. I could almost see his progression before me. It amazes em that someone could tell such a story with so few words. Very well done.
Thank you so much Bill.
All I could say in rhyme was “The Lorimer, find out more.” Roy wins, but that spur is super. 🙂
Thank you Ann…
Well done, Caro!
Thanks Suerae
This made me smile. No wonder you have such a faithful following, Caro! Nicely done!
Thank you kindly Amy!
Lovely post. I learned new words, which is always nice. And I could picture the boy while he was working.
Thanks so much